Looks really beautiful. Artwork in this game look nice but at the end it looks a little rushed.
Try to avoid Instant popup that can lead to accidently input and accept to something. While the player is on in an event that need to use "space" button and there is a popup that may appear right at the moment when the player is going to press "space" button. Instead of inputting to the work screen, the player accidently give input to the popup which doesn't have any delay seconds to allow input.
Overall is nice, I wish there are more fun parts in this game, but all is ok.