Sorry if my english is clumsy, it's not my first langage.
I have the game on steam. The writing is very neat and I enjoyed most of the routes (I only have to read Erna and Marlon's routes yet).
I especially liked Darius' route (well paced, credible and very emotional). I liked Jeremy's and Estelle too. Morally speaking, I couldn't get into the Master's route but I could enjoy it netherless. However, I think that Killian's route is too quickly paced to be really engaging: romantic feelings happen too fast, before we have time to know the character well. Imho this is the weakest route of the game. I like most of the side character too, like Oswald, Clarence en Dana.
Good job! I'll check your other game in the future.
However I can't reach the ending called "conscious choice". In the walkthrough, it is said to choose death in the Master's route but I can't find the option. When is this choice proposed?