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Klauss2 years ago(+1)

So... I just played the demo and it was kinda interesting :D 

This game has potential, that's for sure


I missed sounds... dunno if it's a bug or because it's only a demo yet, but most of the time it was only dull silence...


The BGs are pretty nice, same for the CG - tho there's only those of Devil in that suit with various expressions (something that's good... expressions do enrich a lot the gameplay) - oh, on that note, THE FCK HAPPENED TO HIS LEGS? HAHAHA as it's visible on the images here, he has no legs LOL besides, damn, his bulge is ike half his belly... someone was a bit greedy when drawing that part ("that face" hehe)


The theme is a bit... different... OKAY, a lot different hahaha if u r a religious fanatic of some sort u r prolly not like this demo - dunno about the rest of the story... wonder how it will progress even

oh, Vatican is probably watching u if u playing this one BAHAHA - joking, ofc


For the demo the story was well written and developed - besides the small typos here and there that I wrote on other comments -, the world seems well made, like, there's a good setting full of details and the way it was written really does pull you into the story ;D


I'm waiting for more!!


Some things that made me curious and are - maybe - worth posting on the synopsis: 

  • the story is linear or full of routes and endings? 
  • there's a romance tag so... who's the dateable one(s)? 
  • when there's NSFW, will it be on/off (toggle)?
  • ALSO, WHO THE FCK I'M? BAHAHA like, the MC is human, furry - which species -, alien or what? :P

Oh, consering the topic, - thinking about the cool BGs/CGs so far (and probably more to come, including NSFW BAHAHA) -, will there be a gallery?

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DeclanJax2 years ago

LMAO every time I posted a response I got a new notif!! Thanks so much for your feedback and enthusiasm... seriously has me extra pumped to keep moving on this.

My excuse for not having legs yet is I'm too lazy to draw them LMAO, but in reality, I will be updating sprites for the characters. So I'll have full body sprites /eventually/. But for now I'm keeping things simple. But the rest of the chapter will include new sprites/shirtless (bc of the same reason as >.> ya know >.> )


For brevity's sake, I'll respond to each bullet--but this is all so very helpful! Thank you <3


  • For now, I'm imagining the story will be linear. Perhaps there will be different linear character arcs, though! I wanna focus on telling stories.
  • Devil will be most immediately. But with time, it won't be just him (esp with additional character arcs)
  • Yep. I'm going to learn how to make that a feature before adding NSFW/explicit.
  • There's a super solid reason I haven't quite made a distinction yet! Soon enough

ALSO HELL YEAH GALLERIES R THE BEST. Will be on the docket 100%!!

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Klauss2 years ago (1 edit)

LOL bahaha yeah, sorry for that :P I got entusiastic and if I don't post it ASAP I'd probably forget, so it was "almost" a spam haha

Glad it pumped ya tho - I felt pumped while writing those too haha

Oh, I kinda expected it bahaha considering the CG was well made and all, didn't seemed like u simply place it too high on the screen and was originally meant to not show his legs

HEHEHE Gimme those pecs ;v


  • Hmm so u wanna make something like Killigans Treasure? I mean, there are 3-4 dateable options, but they don't affect the main story - so far at least -, it's like some sort of filler - u come out of the main story for the romance and then come back to main story
  • Cool :D waiting to get to know them 
  • Awesome! Sometimes I want to play like on public places just to enjoy the story - without the lewd stuff - and not being able to turn it off may cause some awkward moments hahaha
  • Oh, okay then xP will be waiting

Maybe it's cool to make it all - specifically the linear one - clear on synopsis and, if possible - like, it's not supposed to be hidden in the story to be revealed later - also add the info of the other dateable chars, showing at least one pic of them xD


Every char will be OC of yours? Also, u made the BGs (painted) or like, u take a pic from google and blur them?


Edit: Just remembered something, u plan on making android version? Or any other platform at all

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DeclanJax2 years ago(+1)

Your comment got me thinking, and I think I found a simple enough solution to moving Devil lower on the screen. I think it looks nice!

And, sorta--I got into visual novels playing Echo Project's stuff, and I like how in some of them, the character's 'route' is basically its own story. I love the possibilities that offers!

I also have played some with the NSFW toggle, and it's been awesome. That and the gallery are a must at some point! I'm working on theorycrafting other OCs for this story, and if they'd be dateable. BGs (for now) are royalty free, public domain images. Taking some advice I heard one of the Echo Project dev's give once--don't worry about stuff like backgrounds upfront. Find some photos to be there in the meantime before you can make/commission the art yourself.

Once I can figure out how to package the APK, yes! Lmao they made it complicated and for what >:(

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Klauss2 years ago

Well, unexpected but glad u got that fixed haha


I think the first VN - and got me on it - isn't even avaiable nowadays LOL it had a weird name too, like B101 or something, now I dunno


And yeah, it's a must!


Hmmm interesting :D but yeah, no sense worring over BG when u don't even have the game up to like half what u want to write hahaha


They u mean Ren'py? Was thinking there was like an option to simply export it as APK...


Well, gonna check out this "Knights College" hehe

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