LOVE the artwork. Very reminiscent of old school JRPGS (for example FF7 and 9, with their prerendered BGs and 3D characters). You build up a lovely atmosphere. Also the cutscenes were good, with a lot of effects put in there... BUT you can easily tell that you did ran out of time.
It's hard to get a good idea of the character before the game freezes (airship crash). The textboxes look a little too plain, a portrait for the hero would've been nice.
I think it has a lot of potential, especially if you deepen the writing and bring out the characters more, and If we get to see what kind of gameplay this would have offered, as we didn't see anything aside from walking and talking and lovely, lovely artwork. I just hope you stick to it and make it shine! :3