Thank you so much!! I planned to have more cutscenes between characters like the one between Genko and Tolkien on day 3 (bonus points to you if you noticed her anger text at the end matches his in his rant), but the time crunch was real. I just barely got everything I wanted in there and I genuinely wanted to flesh the ending dialogues more but..meh such is life.
I definitely need to make it a bit more suggested to talk to everyone each day and to add further cutscenes with everyone (lol and the forest is an understandable nightmare).
I actually was really proud of the text with shiori. I based a lot of it on my own relationship and I'm grateful it shined through.
Thank you for giving me such thorough feedback. I saw when the first year of this contest happened, but was too hesitant to join. This is my first publicly shared game, and if it gets good feedback I'd love nothing more than to build the sequel.
People like you make the world go round!!