Very nice graphics! Would be good if there were sounds as well. Obviously you need to sort out where the player starts in each screen (they should start on the screen). Personally I would prefer less text
I agree with everything you have said. I couldn't add sounds and music because I didn't know how to make it but it does take away from the experience. I used camera triggers instead of Cinemachine to see if it looked better but it didn't work out too well. Thanks for the feedback!
