Just here seconding the remarks about big maps and unwinnable final battle. The battles themselves may have been on the bland side but at least there really were choices, and they didn't drag on too long. In fact, I chose to go to the forest first and that multiple enemies battle was a nail-biter at the end! I also liked how you had some choreographed, humorous cutscenes. They got the point across and weren't too long or boring.
Grammatical nitpick: it's unofficial, not inofficial.
This is a good game jam entry in spite of its flaws. If you use the lessons learned from this jam to refine your technique, I think you'll have a great entry next time.