When I typed the protags name once, I got the long winded Dialogue and suicide part, then it returned me to the main menu which had a save screen once the credits finished. I couldn't save from there, but the option to go into a save screen shouldn't even be there. It also had a loading screen, but thats fine obviously.
I don't really know how I'm supposed to name the protagonist twice, if I'm returning to the menu after the first Time, but maybe something just bugged out on my end, or I messed something up. I played it drained of every Energy I had, so I probably just did something wrong. As for what I forgot to mention, You get a ton of Hints by investigating, which you can kind of use to give you the better/correct answer in the answer parts of the Game? Thats fine, but I think you get way too many. I could basically use one at every answer.
Just some things to keep in mind I guess if you're making another one of those Games in the future, maybe even a longer one. (Just let me poke Jack from the beginning then, I liked to do that).