I liked this a lot, it's always nice to see some Shou love. One thing with the text though was there were a few instances where I tried to advance a text box and couldn't for a few seconds, and wasn't sure if it was an intentional pause for effect or an input issue. The text system overall was really nice though, the presentation/effects are really lively for a VN and it's cool to see. Nice art and music throughout also. I especially liked the card art.