That's pretty good! Also that was all by yourself??
The dress-up gameplay is so slick, to a Touhou fan that just makes you feel so satisfied knowing how the original characters look like.
There's this thing about Jade's motivation though, of which I'm really unsure. At the start, sure things didn't go as bad as expected, but to me, Jade looked more like he was chasing after numbers rather than... self-discovery? Maybe the game was too short to see what's going on in his mind. Anyway, with the way things were presented, that's how it looked to me.