Very good and enjoyable read, it never crossed my mind that Shou would hang out at a bar and filling the role of the wise drinker - and yet I think that's something she'd totally do in canon! (come on ZUN, show us a tiger at a bar already) The visual and audio assets are incredible too.
Everything just kept me fully immersed, and the minigames (fun and relevant) added a kind of interactivity I really like in VNs.
Btw, thanks again for taking some time fixing the softlocks, means a lot to me.