SUPER MINOR. Just wanted to mention one of the dialogue pieces says “I can stop the instant, electric feeling..” - and I’m pretty sure it should be “cannot”.
And another place, “he diverts the attraction to me before..” - should be “attention”.
This is such a great game! So truly, this is a drop in the bucket because everything else more than makes up for these super minor things. The guys are great, the stories are great. Even the ‘bad endings’ are great. I love it all.