Hi Chris! Thanks for so many insightful comments. Writing is my weakest area at the moment so i'll be continuing to work on it. The story didn't really get across what I wanted but it taught me alot. This was my first time writing for a game really and it shows. Thank you for all the amazing coments about the game.
For this game, it was difficult as it was just a team of 2, myself with a background in just programming and an artist. However that isn't an excuse for bad writing or difficult to navigate UI. Again, Thank you for all the feedback and I'll be looking to make improvements!