I loved how much fun you had with the narration!! I'm very impressed by the implementation of all the narration, animations, riddles, and cutscenes! I sadly am struggling to finish the game, although I am curious what the ending is. The creatures the player encounters are very fun (Grog is great) and the puppy is adorable :)
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I got pretty confused though when I got the puppy to go over to the rock and then opened the area that unlocks when the puppy barks. It was all closed off yet I thought I explored all the other areas? The little dinosaur dude in there was cute but he sadly wasn't interactable. The shark room just seems like a deathtrap and the rooms that unlock with the mushroom door don't seem to lead to much of anything. I'm probably just missing something but I'm stumped.
I got stuck (clipped) in two of the rooms/walls in the mushroom door area and had to load a save to get out. If I load a save though it doesn't seem to keep the progress I made on puzzles? For example, I saved in the area past the dog/rock combo then loaded it and the rock that I just got rid of to get back there was back in place.
Also, some of the textures on the rock walls were glitched out, specifically right next to the pawprints? rock and the rock past the dog/ancient rock.
If I'm being extremely nitpicky then a jumping animation would've been nice since you implemented the idle/walking/talking animations but honestly not a big deal that it's not there. Another huge nitpick but some of the text would go out of the black textbox for it, so just make the textbox slightly bigger. Some epic background music also would've been a welcome addition to add to the feeling of this grand quest.
I had a lot of fun playing this game overall, the silly narration definitely made me laugh a few times throughout so great job!! :)