Solid work and good use of strings! I would have liked to see some more velocity changes and a little bit of imperfection or variation in the timing of notes just to make it feel less stationary/straightforward. But overall I like this submission, good work!
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Thanks for the feedback! This was my first time doing any sort of string composition in a DAW and I know exactly what you mean about adding in imperfections to make the string sound a little more dynamic. I would have liked to work a bit more on that aspect of the composition, but I ended up being a crunched for time towards the end of the jam and decided to leave it as is. This is definitely advice I will keep in mind for my future work.
Thanks for listening!