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Echoing many of the comments, I think speeding up time would have been ideal.   I think your choice of art assets was great, but I was a little puzzled by your music--it was oddly calming and sweet against the tenor of something called "shoot a bunch."  As well, the explosions were very loud against the music, so a little audio tweaking would have gone a long way.  Best of luck developing on this idea! :)