I already have an artist, but I think you, like anyone, can help me get some suggestions. Of course there wont be everything but it's still nice to hear your thoughts
ok then, i just thought that it might help main artist with backgrounds. Anyway, then i will rather just draw scetch for artist to redraw and plot for scenarist to think.
But with that i had some problems. Because to help artist i probably shall contact with her/him/etc (and maybe artist don't need help). And for plot i just worry about potencial spoilers, that may be apear if some ideas will fit.
ok, the last night before i'll out of working on pc. (04:18) Results is: 24 pages with 16 674 symbols without spaces (22 118 with spaces) full of technical (ready to use) text, with renpy commands like "scene", "show" and others (but i just reuse already exsisting assets, excluding 5 3D "scetch backgrounds" one song from far internet and a table) and new declared characters needed to the plot.
I write all this text right in .rpy file so all this horror is working.
But even this is just a scetch with quarter of quarter-ended scenes. So I'll probably continue to work on it before sending to you. But sending you at least synopsis (in next rply) is a good idea, at least because this is only thing i can do.
synopsis:
after strange dream in first chapter end, our hero continues to work in his personal heaven. Until phone call of new CEO says, that there’s more work to do. “Freddy-chan’s anime pizzeria” is not only place with animatronic, there is more places like that, and unfortunately not all this places have a good end. So CEO decided to keep and use all animatronic from other closed pizzerias and you are the one, who will meet, repair and introduce it to pizzeria. Closed restaurants, bars, something else.
Pluses:
this plot structure can contain in itself all characters from FNIA, fan-games and even more.
Details:
>First of all Mechanic asks you to lead Foxy to him. (to test recruit scheme)
>Foxy “jokes” on him.
First animatronics we must work on – the “space animatronic’s dance bar” animatronics (glamrock group: four main characters -> sun&moon, bonnie)
>After that “mechanic” will ask you once again to give him Foxy to work on with some “project with potential”
>You ask Puppet about risks and souls inside animatronics (what it looks like)
Then goes “underground party place” (sister location group: Freddy, Foxy, Ballora, Ennard)
>Mechanic tells you about progress with Foxy in this period and let her go.
>after that Puppet notices, that Foxy’s soul looks brighter after work. (rejuvenation)
>Mechanic continues to work with endo-parts.
Then “trash leftys” (just animatronics, founded in local dump) (Nightmare animatronics)
>After that you see SL girls trying to escape buildings to find Baby (you help them)
>Baby have a trauma because of fire on the dump.
>After that, mechanic disappears.
Baby’s soul is abruptly getting weaker, so we must find mechanic to save her.
You found mechanic in coma on his workplace.
>There is some floppy disks on his workspace and needed instruments and his “project with potential” – “Lucky” new animatronic that helps to save Baby, but with condition, that you save her creator after this.
after this you watch material on floppy disks and move into recorded video when you must re-live all animatronic experience of mechanic.
>At the same time in pizzeria awakes tentacle monster and trying to get the girls.
Besides nsfw scenes there is a clue, that mechanic trapped in this floppy disks and tentacle monster is “unlucky” experiment to create a synthetic live form. (the “project with potential” is the second lucky experiment)
First experiment wants to occupy Lucky experiment’s body for endless pleasure. (Unlucky’s mind brokes after you disturbed one of the mechanic's “experiments”)
>you defeat experiment and place her into the tentacle monster that now calm and controls by “lucky”
Once again sorry for disturbing your vacation.