Nice, I score a date with Moebius haha
Really creative and fun concept, love the art style choices, so funny too. The only thing that I want to improve is the font/dialogue box for some more readability. Other than that, really nice job!
It happens quite a lot in most visual novel, especially if there are a lot of choices, sometimes I need to go back to read the previous sentence, and its awkward to read from below upward.
The multiple choices sometimes merge like in one text box, mostly for a long sentence. Its more like a little nuisance more than anything.
Lastly the color, I am not a fan of white text in bright background. Simple dialogue box like the choices (black text in white) is what I preferred most of the time, if we dont want to get fancy.
But all of this is just my preference, you dont have to pay it too much attention, its still a fun experience, keep up the good work!