The game quality is questionable... Lets just say "I missed the Connections"
I honestly found it really short, there wasnt really much of a game here, the play area is beautiful as well as the character sprites, this is where the good things about the game stop.
>There should be some sort of transition when knocking on doors
(I mean I went straight up, knocked and saw nothing, looked down, saw a child and that was probably scarier than any horror game I played)
>I don't know how the Scene Transition really works but I think it can be faster.
>The game finishes really quickly, theres really not much to go, you become a messenger, play hide and seek, and you give a student a book you immediately picked up
>Lastly the game complely missed the connection, I dont see how it ties into the theme
Basically you need to try again, maybe if you put a slight bit more time on brainstorming, you may have gotten a better game or a completely new game, maybe you had a concept but the main idea wasnt realised or implemented.