Super cool… Some feedback. The open scene look nice, but there is no one in the bed. The love letter is addressed to “TEST NAME” “TEST NAME” is addressed again later when you get off the bus.
Nice use of ink.
日本人ですか? 日本語を勉強しています.
I'm glad you liked it. I have fixed the name bug error. Thanks.
PS: I'm not Japanese, nor do I know Japanese :)