A few questions/comments:
1. I think you should expand the menu of girls in your phone to include a few others, namely Amanda, Miranda, Chione, Jemma, Mrs. Williams, Shanice, Candy, Roxy, Cinnamon, Holly, Whitney, Kelly, Eden, Riley, the sexy cop, and the rich girl we meet and take on a date and then never see or hear from again.
2. What happened to the rich girl? we talk to her once, take her on a date, and never see her again.
3. you should add a girl at the cinema, and one at the boxing dojo. or maybe let one of the cheerleaders come to your matches at the dojo to cheer you on.
4. You should be able to take a look at Jenny, Theresa, and Haley's rooms at the dorms.