Awesome first jam game! We all have to start some where (and I dare not dig up my far inferior first jam submission as an example haha), but this was great! Even more impressive is that you did it in half the time with the late start. It'd be great to see what you can do with the full time, and I strongly encourage you to keep on going.
My only note on the game itself is just that the speaking sound of the characters grates my ear just a bit much when speaking for longer periods. BFXR sounds are fickle like that though.