Hey again, thanks for release !
1. I'm still not 100% sold on MCs hair/face, though compared to previous version it's still a big improvement ! Makeup finally looks somewhat attractive, rather than uncanny valley stuff. Her body looks finally more feminine. New clothing design is perfect !
I especially liked:
Tank Top - Being thin, transparent, small, and generally good design
Black/Red Lingerie - Finally lingerie which doesn't look too bulky, I like the lace details, and how smaller each panties tier gets
Stockings - Gigantic plus for garter belts ;)
Meh territory:
Pink Blouse - Looks somewhat off compared to rest of outfit pieces - perhaps it's the color ?
Leather Jacket - Shoud stretch over top layer and beginning of bottom layer I'd say.
2. Absolutely loved the new writting style ! Liked how reaction changed a little depending on clothes MC was wearing. In general liked different perspectives - MC thoughts, thoughts of harassers, or banter between loaders.
3. Working - though as I've said before I don't see a point of it - goal for player it to get as many deals as possible, while early ending of game feels more like punishment than reward...
4. As an experienced player, didn't help me much.
5. Didn't notice bigger change.
6. All right.
7. Liked morning scenes text update - Definitely a step in right direction. Enjoyed new remarks between technicans/men. Hated that 'too dark' parts from earlier release.
The biggest offenders in earlier release were:
High-heels - Good - Liking that regret/boldness dynamic
G-string - Good - Focus on embarassement and excitement is awesome
Pink Blouse - Meh - Not a fan of doubting her feminity. I'd change 'chest' to Bust/Cleavage
I like:
Tank Top - Description of thinness, breath, visibility of lower layer are great !
Red Bra - how she feels it being so revealing it's even worse than wearing nothing at all, and being excited about it with goosebumps
Mini Skirt - Excitement, and awareness how small the coverage is !
8. Makeup deal was showing a little too frequent in my opinion.
9. Felt more challenging in the beginning, but managed to clear it on medium difficulty. Overrall - good choice.
Focus on next update:
1. Transporting is the last wip thing, so waiting for update :D
2. Felt a little off, good call.
3. Can't wait to see all those new beautiful clothes from other angle :P
4. Could you elaborate more on those changes ? What's the purpose of them ?
+ liking the new art assets sneak peeks ;)