This story was really sober and down-to-earth yet still heartfelt, which is an unusual but very appreciated treatment of sexual subjects (and I love that Emma has her phone in the bathroom). I hope the two of them can find ways to connect emotionally in the future. I'd definitely be keen to see more of their story.
I love the art style and expression work as well. Having the splashing sounds as occasional background noise really worked with the atmosphere. I think having more music than that would have detracted from the quiet atmosphere.
My only criticism would be that the font on the menu is a little hard to read, but I still managed to navigate without issues.
(edited because I forgot like half of what I wanted to say)