This was an incredibly cute and charming game to play! I can tell a lot of love went into the spritework, the music- just about everything, really. I've always loved games that let you run your own shop, so the game hit a really soft spot in my heart because of that. I love how you were able to interact 4 whole endings, I really liked the story, and honestly it was just a very fun experience.
I do wish that the "cleaning item" minigame had some variations, or another way to play. By the end of my playthrough, my wrist was starting to hurt a little from the button mashing, which was unfortunate as it discouraged me a bit from playing again to see other endings. I also think that the weeding game would be fun if it were timed or had some other variations, but given it served as a good way to serve extra money/time constraints, I understand why it worked the way it did.
Other than that, I more or less agree with the other commenter here. I would have loved more flavor dialogue from the NPCs, but the game stands well without it. It was a short, delightful little experience, and definitely one of my favorites so far.