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Halo MirageV, I played the game to completion and I wanted to give my thoughts…HOWEVER. I did come out fairly negative, and this seems a very “tailored to the people who know the context” sort of game, so feel free to ignore me. I have a very specific taste and this didn’t work for me.

  •  +Art is nice and cohesive, especially the UI presentation.
  • +The concept of the traveling points and their usage are neat, though I feel the project is just too short and simple to explore it.
  • +The combat animation was great, especially the motions of the actor during the skill usage. I did feel like it could lose one or two particle effects to be snappier.
  • +Skill technicalities were nice! I definitely enjoy skills with added conditional effects.
  • -The lack of sound effects made the VN parts very sparse and their absence was definitely felt.
  • -I’m not personally into the heavy anime style with giant…appendages? Myself? But I sure as hell am not an artist.
  • -Nitpick: the game keeps talking as if the environment is so gloomy and sad, but it looks nice and not gloomy at all XD
  • -The writing felt like it took too many shortcuts, too much exposition rather than showing, especially when it comes to the interaction with the friends (oddly the two “mystery” characters were much better in that regard).

Overall, I do not feel very comfortable criticizing the story and such, because I feel this was not made for me. As I understand it this is an offshoot of an already existing game series, and with no knowledge of that, I am left cold on a lot of the story and I don’t get grabbed and engaged too much. It doesn’t help that I’m TOLD what to feel rather than see why I should, and I felt extremely disconnected emotionally.

I’m pretty sure this would hit way different if I knew the context and had an existing link to these characters, but as I don’t, there’s not a whole lot I can say.

 I’m linking the vid, but I was pretty negative, so feel free to skip it. I understand my style is not for everyone (especially when it’s your own game).

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Thank you for playing! I watched your video, and while it is unfortunate that your overall opinion came out negative, I did get a few laughs out some moments in the playthrough, as well as useful nuggets of feedback for improvement.

Your criticisms are completely valid though. Especially on the plot end. This isn't specifically meant to be a game for 'people that know'. I just didn't spend more time fleshing out the plot scenes due to the deadline and a late-ish start. Like I said in another reply though, that's no excuse, and I fully intend to address that in future updates!

I'm glad you enjoyed the combat though. That is usually my forte rather than plot. This was my first time working with sideview in RPG Maker since like... 2017. I've got a lot more to learn about character motions, but I'll get there! As for the art, I completely understand that the anime aesthetic isn't everyone's cup of tea, so I'm happy to leave that point off the table, haha. 

Bottom line though, I'll be doing my best to address the concerns you've raised and strive to make this a better game than it is right now. 

Thanks again!