Hey! I played through your game and had fun with it. It felt like I was playing through an interactive horror movie from the 90s, which was great. I wrote down a couple of notes I wanted to share with you:
- Ambience and BGM REALLY shine here. Great sound design! I feel like if you add footstep sound effects, it would make it even better
- Good job showcasing the personality of each character in a short amount of time and with a relatively large cast
- The timed segments were a nice way to break up the dialogue - I would have loved more moments like this during the game!
- The text needs a little extra proofreading - I was still able to understand what was going on, so it wasn't too bad
- I couldn't get past the part where the main character is about to give her answer to Banks' proposal. The screen turns black and stays that way. I can still access the menu, so I feel like it might just be that you tinted the screen black and didn't tint it back, so an easy fix
Overall, it was a very atmospheric game with some cool storytelling and gameplay elements. I hope I'll be able to finish it in the future!