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I was very impressed with this one. I really liked the tactical battle system and for the most part the game was enjoyable. But there were a few negatives I found off-putting. I want to get those out of the way first, then I'll move on to the positives. 

- I will say that I spent a few times resetting my save file because the monsters were randomly given to you and I kept getting trash. I got that rock thing given to you at the beginning not once but twice. Spent 150G to get 3 rocks. After resetting, I realized that I couldn't save right before I accessed the machine. Ouch. I really wish I was able to do this. This is a game I would prefer to have autosave turned off.  

- At first I used the 3 rocks in the tournament and did fine. I won the first battle and finally got a new mon. I won the second battle. Then I faced Hunter and boy did I want to OWN him! Sadly, Hunter's ONE creature completely demolished my team. I did like 2 damage and then got dealt back 10 damage. At this point I reset the save file and started over. 

- This next playthrough I realized that I could trade and battle the other characters. Why was this not brought up at the beginning? I saw that if you talk to the other characters in that first map before ending the day that they mention it but I was following robot guy's instructions and I didn't dilly dally too much. I spent about another 30-45 minutes grinding to get a creature I could use to KICK HUNTER'S BUTT! Alas, I had trouble accomplishing this task. 

- I finally gave up and sadly couldn't get past Hunter.

Now I know this sounds discouraging but there are a lot of positives about this one too.

+ Good use of assets. The tiles, characters, and music flow really well.

+ The battle system was fun and easy to understand.

+ The characters and dialogue are well written and each character had different personalities. I especially liked you made a character like Hunter. I don't think I've ever wanted to punch a fictional videogame character more in my life.

+ The designs of the monsters were cute and funny.

+ I think you incorporated the theme really well. 

Overall, I did enjoy this game but do think it needs more balancing and I think given the randomness of the machine, I think it needs a way to turn off autosave. (There actually might be a way in options but I didn't think to look...) Lastly I think it needs more direction. Like I mentioned, I didn't know you could trade and battle to get gold so at first I thought I was just stuck with what I got and had to use those in the tournament.

I think you did a great job on this. You worked hard to make something unique and it shows. Thank you for making this. :D

Oh wow. I love getting this level of feedback and I apologize it took so many days to respond to it (my job is truly kicking my butt). 

I really appreciate you putting your negatives here, and I wanted to address a few:

-I'm so embarrassed that I neglected to put some kind of warning or info regarding the machines. The only autosaving in the game is mandatory when using the machines as an anti-cheating measure. I was really inspired by Megaman Battle Network's trade machine, but even that machine does give a warning. Big whoops on my part!

-I hope you'll forgive me copy/pasting this from another comment to explain the rates:

The capsule machines are actually configured to not give anything too good too soon. It takes a randomized number and depending on the level, subtracts from that. The logic is the following:

-before 1st round: -30, makes it impossible to get the best 6 monsters (essentially locking out the epics and strongest rares)

-before 2nd round: -15, makes it impossible to get the epics

-before round 3: no limitation! Best chances of getting the rarest mons! (The hinted love interest, Nina, might have a special Capsule Monster for you if you go to talk to her and trade after her ordeal...)

These limitations unfortunately meant lady armor was so common in the pre first round, but it can be taken advantage of to make sure you get certain mons at certain times! 

-I DEFINITELY should have made it a bit clearer that you could play the players to negate bad RNG. I wanted to reward exploration, but I can see how it would make it harder for players who don't want to stop to talk to the NPCs.

-I'm very sorry you didn't get to kick Hunter's butt! If it helps at all, Nina, the hinted love interest, trades you an Epic for a common, and has some special unique dialogue to encourage Maria. I liked the symbolism of the "weakest" player choosing to help you in such a way.

Thank you for all of the constructive criticism! I genuinely think this is the best game I've ever made (at least in concept and overall gameplay) and I think I actually want to make a "definitive edition" that's a commercial release in the future. So all of these comments are huge for me.

I'm so glad the music and art seems to have gone over well with people. It's the first time I've done so much pixel art edits and straight up new character art for a game, so I'm grateful it worked well. 

If you're a fan of lore each character has 3 conversations you can have with them at any given time. It's meant to be a reward for exploration/acting like Maria would and they leave comments on how they died and hints at the sort of life they had. I tried really hard to be respectful with what I was trying to imply for Nina's past, so I'm glad so many seemed to like how everything was handled.

Thank you for reviewing! I'm so excited to play your 2nd entry! Framework was really something special and I'm excited to see another collecting game!!

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Hey, I’m so glad you responded! I was worried I was too harsh for a bit there. And I understand the work kicking your butt. Lol. I’m scheduled 7 days in a row this week. And Legends Untamed is not as tested as Framework is so keep an open mind about that. FrameWork is the one I clearly spent more time on. 

Oh not at all! Sorry if my review for Legends Untamed is too harsh. I genuinely liked both games!

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Hey I really appreciate all of the feedback you gave me! I actually worked on the game further and I have a much more updated demo! The drop rates are fixed, you can better tell enemies from players, and I added Capsule Monster Classes to add magic and support to the game! I'm working towards a kickstarter release and eventual commercial version so I would really appreciate your brand of constructive criticism again should you ever want to play again!