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What I liked

  • I'm a big fan of the art style. 
  • Implementing QTE is pretty ambitious, so huge kudos on that.
  • I liked the music in general, but I will mention it again in the section below.
  • The theme is clearly implemented without having to be explained how the theme is implemented.

Suggestions/Feedback

  • Personally, I felt like the music was a little too loud in comparison with entity sounds, I feel like entity sound volumes should take priority over the music's volume. They're the main concern so the player should be drawn to that.
  • The downside of implementing QTE is that a tutorial is basically mandatory. Not having one, you risk a lot of players giving up because they don't feel like scrolling back to the page and re-reading everything again. I think its even more critical in your game's case because of the art style.

Overall, its a good submission. If you move forward with this project, I'd love to play again when a tutorial is implemented!

I like a constructive feedback!~

I didnt realize the music was too loud actually. This is something I need to look into. 

Not designing tutorial was big mistake for me. A mistake I have repeated twice.

No problem. Good feedback helps us get better!