(Minor Spoilers)
This is your best visual novel yet Eroraen! So much of it was done very well.
The art was fantastic, Serena’s design was very well done and I love the way you used colors during the sunset and starry night scene.
The English, while being iffy at times, is a definite improvement from your previous games, with better grammar and more natural dialogue.
The music was a big improvement from Reiko, too. It captures the theme of the game perfectly.
Speaking of the which, I really like the themes of self-sacrifice, loneliness, love, loss, and grief. It was very touching. When Serena said she was afraid of getting close to Edgar because he was going to inevitably leave made me sad ;~;
Also, it seems that Rebeca managed to sneak into another one of your games, lol
Nevertheless, I really did enjoy this visual novel of yours, and can’t wait for the rest to come!