I think this system could have potential, and I do love the concept behind it, unfortunately, I found it inaccessible to me to really understand; I think some nicer layouts, condensing of information / related information onto pages so it wasn't so much scrolling, and tone/grammar adjustments could have gone far in making it more accessible to read. The run-on sentences were a bit tough to parse through.
That being said, what I have managed to read through has looked promising. I honestly think it could be a cool system if formatted a bit better to parse through. - Kiwi