The custom art in this game is really beautiful and parts of the dialogue were rather witty, but a larger majority felt forced and awkward / like it didn't fully fit with the overall tone and aesthetic of the game. It did make me laugh that the entire story was based around Juno's lack of strawberries -- and riding on a penguin made me laugh!
Overall, I think you have an interesting start to something with this one, but there are parts that could definitely use some more time and polish. I hope you keep working on this one!