Not a bad game. I'm sure this genre has its fans, but still I would like more interactivity, perhaps a choice of dialogues or moving around the location. I also want to note that the pixels are blurry, which makes it difficult to focus on reading the text. I liked the music.
More interactivity would be for a future game. We opted to use the format of the most basic type of visual novel because neither of us have experience creating them. My collaborator had to figure out how to write a script and I had to learn how to draw the appropriate graphics. Sorry about the text. It appears something broke when we expanded the screen size. I'm aware that even other fans of the genre won't have much to rate on gameplay. That's fine. This is mainly an experiment to see if we could.