I appreciate the concept of the underestimated hero that you were working with here. The story was well-written and everything fit together nicely. I did find the description of Yinepu versus his actual actions to be somewhat incongruous; after he was described as a screwup, I expected him to save the day with weaponized incompetence, not what actually happened - although the general mood of lighthearted craziness was well-done and helped carry the story off well. Bonus points for the hand-drawn art as the project image!