Let me start this off with, I love how the game was SHORT. It still felt complete.
There's not a whole lot to say of this. It was a pleasant short adventure game. It had a touching story to tell. The character portraits were nothing short of spectacular. The dialogue was well written.
The mapping was very well done. There were some personal quirks I have with it. I think there's a little too much clutter, stuff that stops you from moving. And I wish the flavor text objects were a little more obvious. Very very minor quirks.
I also think there's a little too much flavor text. Plenty of it added to the story quite well, still.
Walking around and examining objects isn't my cup of tea, but that's personal preference and I know a lot of people enjoy games like this. The story it did tell was meaningful and I believe had plenty of personal stuff etched here and there.
Good job all around! I wish you the best of luck.