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I enjoyed reading a story about the halflings and shadow creatures, which was a nice departure from some of the other, more martial races usually represented.  

As mentioned by a few others, I had some trouble following the story in a few places, and in others the writing did feel a bit flat.  I think giving you more room to write on the clover's connection to his dream would help, but would require a trimming down some of the description on the nightmares attacking the village, or possibly trying to trim down the dream.  It's a trade off, to be sure, but those usually exist in 1,000 word short stories.  

Thank you for sharing this with us as part of the jam!