Thank you so so much for your feedback.
I do apologise for the time it took to answer. I had some technical issues.
<<I'm not familiar enough with classical/baroque music to know if it is historically common to repeat the bass notes in that fashion>>
It is a little uncommon as baroque music reposes upon tension. The bass is supposed to be an integral part so it gets its own parts that are independent (mostly) from the rest of the score. The basso continuo is usually what gets to play the same notes the bass played in my piece. However, this style is totally normal for classical music as there is a priority on the violins to carry the melody and the bass + violas to accompany.
I do not understand what you really mean by "the music was carrying you". Would you please elaborate? I will answer quickly this time.
In all and all, thank you for your feedback. I am still working on giving the listener that feeling of continuity you mentioned.
Thank you for your feedback. I would love to know if I could follow you if you decide to stream or post your music somewhere.