Really enjoying the remaster! The expanded dialogue is great and the models look really good. Camera angles on the scenes are good, especially the scattered POVs. The first POV during the split was really nice, and I would have expanded it to include Liz repeatedly tapping him in the groin with the prompt to ask or refuse help from the teacher. There were a few parts in the earlier scenes that seem to be missing giggling audio, and I know that was definitely in the V1 game during the sparring. Another recommendation would be to make the game over screen kick you back to the main menu, if possible. Sorry for all the nitpicking here, I really do love all your work and this is my favorite so far!
Edit: Just discovered that the ending after picking both top choices has the same game freeze mentioned in the other comment, fyi!