I like the concept. I think it could be expanded more, for example, adding more gameplay features rather than just dialogue. This story is pretty interesting so some other gameplay could really improve this game.
One thing I didn't really like was the dialogue sounds. Maybe they were too loud but it started getting a little hard to listen. One suggestion would be to give the player the ability to skip the dialogue animation (also helps for faster readers).
Although, the story really is interesting and the fact that the player slowly gains their senses is really cool so keep on working after the jam!