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This game definitely reminded me of the NES-era games from the title card, to the music, to the art that you used! 

Be careful with your scrolling text at the opening for a couple of reasons -- one, it's hard to read with that size / color / speed. But also because it drops a lot of information on the player right at once that they're unfamiliar with, so it's harder to get engaged with than if you'd included it in pieces within the progression of the game.

I LOVE your world map! I find them very difficult to do well, and yours is really lovely. :)

I'm definitely interested to see more from this world after playing through this game. Thanks for sharing it with us! :)

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Thank you for playing!

For sure the scrolling text will be improved in the next update, since it is the main bugbear people have and I can see why :)

Yes, the world map making is something that comes with practice but I have a good tip for you:

Have an existing JRPG world map open in your browser and overlay your editor screen so they sit side by side. 

The trick is not to copy exactly of course, but it will give you a nice idea where to plonk the grass and where best to have forested/mountainous areas etc. Remember, geologically speaking, coastlines are more mountainous than inland areas but of course you have to mix it up.

Thanks for commenting and good luck with your projects!