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Well…Life Eternal!

I’ll start with something someone never said…maybe.

I loved the PDF inside! It was a little throwback in the past where you had an instruction manual when you bought a game.

…enough, let’s talk about the game.

Unfortunately I got the bad ending (because I like doing evil things in games) and I didn’t found like one note and one skeleton :( Yes…it’s a weird premise.

Graphics are really good and gorgeous. Music is really nice, especially when you are in the forest. The story is…well… is something kinda simple and classic, but done well. You created a little world for this story and it really shows the effort and passion you put on it.

I can only say one thing.

Sure, games like this are good, but on videogames you can show more of your character and world instead by only text. You got a whole medium, you can fight and maybe the character shows his kindness by not hurting anyone and healing, you shouldn’t make classic RPG battles. The skeletons in the forest are an example. Puzzles and minigames are a way to improve your gameplay and making players more engaging on it. The summary is…experiment more with this medium because you can do more instead just walking and telling a story. I really hope to see your future works and you will surely reach an high place, maybe even winning a prize.

Have a good day!

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Well, considering this is not an RPG I'm not sure why I would add fighting to the game, but I appreciate your thoughts on the matter! I definitely agree I could have added puzzles or even a minigame to liven things up, but in the case of simplicity, kept things simple. If I ever do another game similar to this one, I will definitely be adding more to do than walking and exploring to unfold the story! 

And I am so glad you liked the PDF!! I really wanted to do the throwback to instruction manuals from my childhood and I had a ton of fun actually making it!

Thank you for playing!

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Howdy! The fighting was an example. My real message was in fact to experiment more with the medium and I am sure you will do great things! I know one month is really few time, don’t worry! Anyway you did a really good job with your instruments! ☺️

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Haha, I get it now! Thank you so much!