Looks great, sounds great! The art is fantastic--are they based on your dnd characters? It's a sweet, charming story with appealing characters, and you created a complete narrative in just one weekend!
My only suggestions are just interface. I agree it was hard to tell who's talking--I would like to have a third text color for narration and a fourth color for other characters like the necromancer. Also, it felt inconsistent when the narration progressed on its own versus when the next line was presented as an option you had to click; I would save the choice buttons for when there's an actual choice with multiple options and have it progress on its own otherwise. But I definitely enjoyed it!