Hello,
Of course you know I streamed your game since you were present for the entire stream, but as a courtesy I always leave a comment on the game's store page to help summarize my thoughts in a more coherent manner since my unfiltered spoken word is often inelegant, stuttery, and drowned in alcohol.
Overall, you always excel at presentation, and unlike my experience with False Server, I found the writing more intriguing. The downside is that this game is short and really is more of an interactive narrative and less of a game since there are not even branching paths in such a short game. As a result, it's tough to make a definitive opinion on the game, especially when it's slated to be part of a series that unfortunately seems to be a long ways away from being complete.
If you want to rewatch my stream (or if you are not the dev and just a casual reader checking the comments) you can click the link below. You can use the time stamps to skip to when I play your game.