Hi, Thank you for checking it out. It's the first time I'm trying my hand at Ink or an interactive fiction. Yes, I see your point, a more effective way of communicating would be in an active exploration style (tried yours, you seem to have things lined up and well written and presented too, with little snippets requiring interactions to continue rather than read a whole para, Noice !!!!). Had no planning or larger project in mind as such, just wanted to test myself in a jam and see if I can pull something off within the time limit on Ink. I'll try to bring a twist and get it more like explorative and "on-the-job" world building like you said. Thanks again for the thought.