Some nNew idea at 11/9, pls see:
1. The wifu girls which is coming form dimensional locker, I think there should little change. Maybe my problem, I think it's should considered to do something to their upper body, showing the upper part etc.
2. I know this not my call, about the wifu girl "HatsuneMiku", I think she's a common favorite for everyone, but this should be a good choice for this.
3. Have you even hear "marunomi", the locker abduct the girl inside can also be regarded as "marunomi". Maybe think little more on it, I huge tentacle also inside the locker, this tentacle not responsible "scratching", they acting swallow half girl from below, can see a bit of the tentacle coming up from throat, and some of the tentacle "scratching" already. Put a x-ray speech bubbles in the scene for showing the big tentacle inside.