okay so my honest opinion your gonna half to change a lot if you want this to catch on this is basically a copy paste of lessons in love but characters look a little different and the spots are changes up but there personality's can be related to a lot of the girls from lessons in love the story for the most part is basically lessons in love there really nothing that set this game apart of lessons in love there nothing wrong with taking inspiration from other games but this is way too much sorry but this will be a hard pass for me
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This is definitely noted, however, do play the game til the end and give me your criticism on it. The personalities of the girls can be similar from game to game as I've been going on through a list of personalities I want each of the girls to have. As for it being a copy paste of LiL, it was inspired by it. It will not be the same game because I do not possess the same ability as Sel. There's no way in a million years I would be able to create a masterpiece like his work. That is why I will be going in a slightly different direction with this game. That slightly different direction will go into a bigger impact as the story progresses.
i mean ill give the benefit of the doubt and try to carry on i wasn't trying to knock it it was more supposed to be feedback and criticism then anything but it was extremally late for me when i wrote it and wasn't really thinking how to word it just typed now that i re read it it sounded a lot harsher then i intended i didn't mean to call it a copy and paste of lessons in love i think that would be hard for anyone to do considering just more or less you can tell it was heavily inspired by lessons in love and it was hard to see the game as something different which could in the end effect how well the game dose from other peoples views on the game hence why i said at this time it didn't feel like anything was setting the game apart from it hence the voice of opinion on making big changed to set it apart like dose not half to be a complete change just different in some areas is all i always want too see devs succeed in there creations so if my feed back can help im more then happy to assist
Even if it was harsh, it's still criticism that I will take with open arms. I do see what you meant with how the first half of the game would make it seem extremely similar but the second half will make you start thinking otherwise. The future updates (this one coming up as well if I manage to push the extra four events into it by Oct 1st) will show that it becomes different overall as there are elements that will be vastly different. It's just basically a matter of time since I already have a whole years of work outlined with important events placed throughout. Please do continue the feedback and don't be shy to stop by the server either.