I played this with my teammate and we really enjoyed it! We thought it was a very good concept, and the writing was amazing! However, it could use some more polish, but I understand it's a jam game - some times it be like that. For example, the timer only having the seconds and not the minutes shown really confused me, because once it ran out the first time I assumed it was a debugging feature and that we weren't on a time limit.
Another piece of critique: again, we both love the concept, but I feel like having a timer on a dialogue-based game is a bit unfair, since it punishes slower readers. Maybe you could have the timer pause when there's text on screen?