I have questions. Unfortunately, i do not deal very well with metaphors and allegories.
- Is the main story line what the forensic doctor gathers from the autopsy he performs on the victim?
- Seems like the escapist was involved in a kind of body-themed cult — “Venules”? Had to look up this one in the dictionary — just to escape from the “outside world”, hence “The Escapist”. Is this true? What’s the purpose of the cult?
- Does the last room have a path that leads to a different ending, or is the black space a symbolic representation of the corpe’s decay? I tried a couple of paths with no variation to the ending.
I really wish i could write like you do; i felt like i was reading a professional-level novel. Everything contributed to give the right atmosphere, and i specially liked the avatars of all the cult members that speak.