Thanks for the lovely comment! I offered many subtle hints regarding Theo - and some not so subtle too, haha! I've actually already updated those typos you've pointed out :) V0.4 was released the other week on my Patreon for early access - which I added new content for each route, the main story and also went through the script to catch as many typos and bugs like the ones you've suggested :
The free version will be available to download here on 7th Oct 22 :) But, if you or anyone else reading can't wait - you can join my Patreon and get access to the early release - https://www.patreon.com/posts/new-hope-v0-4-72057337?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&u...
Thanks playing, hope you enjoy future content as much as you've enjoyed playing Straight!?