I really liked this a lot. This has a really nice chill fall vibe and was a lot of fun to play. The particle effects really do a lot to bring the scene to life. The mechanic is simple but perfect for a short jam like this. The only thing that would change I think is the text which starts to bug you a bit after it keeps taking control from the player. I think an in-world tutorial that teaches through example might work better for this.
Regardless, really polished short game, great job on this! My game is linked below if you want to check it out.